Monday, April 28, 2008

complete with Titles

I am very interested in hearing your critiques. I know that it is standard to just leave a "feel good" comment - ex. "wow, I love it!" "Perfect!" "Don't change a thing! You're amazing, Glenn, and you should work for Pixar!!" Don't hesitate to leave that as well, but if you see something that could be better - let me know. I am using this for a camera-setup portfolio piece and I want it to be nice.

Grazie amici

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4 comments:

Emron said...

"wow, I love it!" "Perfect!" "Don't change a thing! You're amazing, Glenn, and you should work for Pixar!!"

Emron said...

lol.
Cool man. Can you hide the curve that shows up on the last shot? Also, seems like he falls too fast at the end, makes the end feel too abrupt.
You're the camera wizard, but just maybe some things to try? I'm not good at camera, but maybe hold the shot where he first starts and disappears from camera felt like I wanted that to hold a tad longer before the cut.
The camera shake was cool, also seemed to cut a little abrupt right after the shake.
I liked the camera on the swirly-do.

my two cents.

Tyler (characters N' sketches) said...

fun cinematography elements...

...I think that it would be great to see some of this kind of stuff but with a short story idea, maybe with more "character"...

Glennard said...

nice, nice. I like where this is going! Keep 'em coming.

Rip it apart!