Sunday, April 27, 2008

full first draft of Half Pipe Dream

Here it is, the entire first draft of this little exercise I've been working on. Like I mentioned before, the idea came from a childhood dream, but I'm using it now to explore camera angles and camera movement. I welcome criticism and approval just the same. Let me know if this is understandable. What works and what doesn't work for you? What is confusing?

1 comment:

Murphy said...

certainly understandable, I believe it works